I completely agree and really like the biotechnology way of conforming an argument/essay. It is much like the way I would go approaching a controversial subject. I like how a moderate tone would be used when constructing this essay. It's very important to have your paper come off as snobbish because then no one would read it. In order to get your point across, you need a moderate tone. I also like how enough evidence needs to be presented before giving opinions on your topic. This is a very important step because for me I sometimes get carried away in putting my opinions in about a topic. But if I stick to presenting facts then I will surely not have this problem. Lastly, provide solutions. There's no point in writing a paper about something if you don't provide some kind of solution. I've been trying to do this all of my papers this semester. It really helps to try and think outside the box in trying to think of ways to help the environment.